Hi folks, I’m composing a really (Yes, Really!) good love story, but I’m having trouble with the shag scene. Yes, I know a thing or two about such matters (Ha Ha). 
How far can I take it, without it being distasteful or breaking folkways? That is the question I ponder, as I write this passionate tale. It coincides with a few other stories on the blog, which are all fiction, as this one will be. I should have it finished by Wednesday evening, but if you have any suggestions or ideas, please let me know. What say you?
P.S.: This is a long short story of romance and peril, with an exhilarating ending. When I say long, I mean about eight to ten pages, if all goes well. I will be polishing this one up for a while, so you are going to have to wait, I’m afraid.
P.P.S.: I will be rewriting the other stories that cooccur with the forthcoming story. I’ve looked back at these early stories, and I’m quite humiliated.
#1 by Susan Abraham on Wednesday, December 27, 2006 - 7:34 am
I can’t view your picture where I am, Jeffy.
But maybe later.
Sounds like fun.
Good luck with the story & here’s looking forward to a read.
#2 by Susan Abraham on Wednesday, December 27, 2006 - 7:36 am
Oh…oh, ok. I can see the cartoon now.
Forgive the pun if I say…
I get the picture!
#3 by Jefferson Davis on Wednesday, December 27, 2006 - 7:01 pm
Hi Susan, the “shag” scene is almost finished. I should have it up tonight, or what will be Thursday to you. A few more cups of tea and a relaxing tune, ought to help me finish it up.