Me having trouble with shag scenes

Hi folks, I’m composing a really (Yes, Really!) good love story, but I’m having trouble with the shag scene.  Yes, I know a thing or two about such matters (Ha Ha).  :)   How far can I take it, without it being distasteful or breaking folkways?  That is the question I ponder, as I write this passionate tale.  It coincides with a few other stories on the blog, which are all fiction, as this one will be.  I should have it finished by Wednesday evening, but if you have any suggestions or ideas, please let me know.  What say you?

P.S.:  This is a long short story of romance and peril, with an exhilarating ending.  When I say long, I mean about eight to ten pages, if all goes well.  I will be polishing this one up for a while, so you are going to have to wait, I’m afraid.  :)

P.P.S.:  I will be rewriting the other stories that cooccur with the forthcoming story.  I’ve looked back at these early stories, and I’m quite humiliated.  :)

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